雅思寫作中應避免出現(xiàn)的低分雅思寫作詞匯

雅思寫作中應避免出現(xiàn)的低分雅思寫作詞匯，今天小編就給大家?guī)砹搜潘紝懽髦袘苊獬霈F(xiàn)的低分雅思寫作詞匯，希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。

雅思寫作中應避免出現(xiàn)的低分雅思寫作詞匯

很多雅思考生雖然勤學苦練，但依舊拿不到高分，自我感覺寫的非常流暢，不過，并不是流暢就一定會得高分的。很多雅思考生會陷入一種誤區(qū)，認為雅思口語和寫作詞匯相同，常常不注意雅思寫作還是口語的場景，亂用詞匯，使得整篇雅思作文讀上去很low,下面就給大家介紹幾款雅思寫作中應該避免出現(xiàn)的低分雅思寫作詞匯，在平時的雅思寫作中練習中一定要注意，不要踩到雷區(qū)。另外，為了提高寫作詞匯多樣性和豐富度，給大家?guī)硌潘紝懽髟~匯同義詞替換。

低分雅思寫作詞匯1. I think/believe

不單單是在口語中，很多人在寫作中都會出現(xiàn)這種表達，其實在寫作中，不能出現(xiàn)“我覺得，我認為”這些帶有強主觀性的表達，在雅思寫作中，如果是議論性的論文，你就需要提供合理的論述理由和證據(jù)，來支持你的觀點。所以慎用“I think/believe”

低分雅思寫作詞匯2. So/very/ basically/ totally/essentially/really + adj / adv

很多考生，包括我也是，為了加長句子，通常會在形容詞和副詞前再加副詞或形容詞，疊加使用,很多時候都在用這些高頻(其實是overuse)副詞來強化觀點，不但很不正式，同時也是錯誤的。

1) 累贅：It is essentially very hot in Hangzhou now.

2) 累贅：Travelling is so good.

3) 累贅：Doing this job is really hard for me.

這些句子都比較啰嗦，表達不明確，用詞普通，這種疊加的想強調(diào)程度的，應該用正式的、強烈的高級詞匯進行同義替換，比如：

1) 推薦：It is scorching in Hangzhou now.

2) 推薦：Travelling is wonderful.

3) 推薦：Doing this job is difficult for me.

雅思寫作詞匯替換表達：Very good ，你可以用：

1) top-notch ['tɑp'nɑt?] adj. 最高質(zhì)量的;第一流的 n. 最高度

2) splendid英 ['splend?d] 美 ['spl?nd?d] adj. 輝煌的;燦爛的;極好的;杰出的

3) terrific 英 [t?'r?f?k] 美 [t?'r?f?k] adj. 極好的;極其的，非常的;可怕的

4) excellent

5) magnificent

6) fabulous 英 ['f?bj?l?s] 美 ['f?bj?l?s] adj. 難以置信的;傳說的，寓言中的;極好的

7) outstanding

雅思寫作詞匯替換表達：very bad

1) horrible

2) terrible

3) outrageous英 [a?t're?d??s] 美 [a?t'red??s] adj. 粗暴的;可惡的;令人吃驚的

4) distressing

5) awful

雅思寫作低分詞匯：delicious

1) Appetizing英 美 ['?p?'ta?z??] adj. 開胃的;促進食欲的

2) Delectable英 [d?'lekt?b(?)l] 美 [d?'l?kt?bl] adj. 美味的;令人愉快的

3) Flavorful英 ['fle?v?f?l] 美 ['flev?f?l] adj. 可口的(等于flavourful);充滿…味道的;有香味的

4) scrumptious 英 ['skr?m(p)??s] 美 ['skr?mp??s] adj. 美味的;絕妙的，極好的

5) enjoyable

6) palatable英 ['p?l?t?b(?)l] 美 ['p?l?t?bl] adj. 美味的，可口的;愉快

雅思寫作低分詞匯3. lots of / Many/few/ a lot of...

對于這些比較模糊的描述，其實沒有具體數(shù)字有說服力，令人信服，所以最好給出具體的數(shù)字或者使用更正式高級的表達。

1) 累贅：I went to the museum a few times last year.

2) 推薦：I went to the museum two times last year.

在寫作中，最好能用簡潔且令人信服的描述來闡述或論證自己的觀點和傳達信息，言簡意賅，點到為止。

雅思寫作低分詞匯 4. Each and every 每一…

你是不是一緊張也會這兩個單詞一起用呢，其實這個表達不是非常正確，一般只需要用其中一個詞即可。

累贅： Each andevery time we see something new, we wish todocument it in some form or another.

雅思寫作低分詞匯 5. pasthistory/past experience

按照中文的翻譯，確實表示“以前的經(jīng)歷或是經(jīng)驗”，我們的考生也經(jīng)常這樣搭配使用，感覺沒啥問題，但是在這里，無論是history還是experience都已經(jīng)包含了past的意味，所以兩個詞放在一塊是多余的，把past去掉即可。

累贅： Accordingto my past experience，we need to be more brave and carm down when faced with challenging decisions.

雅思寫作低分詞匯 6. personal opinion 個人觀點

opinion在定義上，本質(zhì)上就包含personal，因為它不是基于事實，而是根據(jù)個人視角和判斷形成的，所以personal在這里語義重復，應該去掉。

累贅： It is my personal opinion that winter is the best season.

雅思寫作低分表達7. For all intents and purposes 總而言之

直接總結(jié)觀點更簡潔，基本不會又外國人用這樣的表達在他們的report或是paper中，但是也不能用in a word,其實這里有個陷阱就是，有些閱卷的考官，較起真來，就會有這樣的評斷，你真有本事，你就真用一個單詞來總結(jié)呀。所以大家真的要總結(jié)的話，其實in all就夠了。

雅思寫作低分詞匯8. firstly, secondly, thirdly

看到這個，你中招了嗎，你是不是要非常喜歡用這樣的第一，第二…來闡述自己的論據(jù)或是列舉觀點。其實這樣確實會讓你的文章看起來非常地老套、笨拙。

推薦：To begin/start with, in addition，additionally， as well as, most importantly,last but not least. For one…, for another…等

雅思寫作低分表達9. Everything has two sides/every coin has two sides

國內(nèi)一些高校的老師經(jīng)常會給學生推薦陳舊的上世紀的老套寫作用詞，估計連教案都是幾十年不換的吧。這里可以負責任地說，在雅思寫作中，這個并不適用。請一定一定要避免這種雅思寫作中的低分表達。

雅思寫作低分表達10. There is survey……

這種表達真的要慎用，因為很可能你就會被考官起疑，懷疑你這些都是你編的，除非是給出確實存在的特定研究。所以大家慎用這個表達。

雅思寫作低分詞匯11. Nowadays

這個詞真的是overuse了呢，已經(jīng)被用爛了。人家考官一看到，基本能確定分數(shù)檔了，應該去掉，并沒有什么意義。

雅思寫作低分表達12. No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly

雅思寫作中忌諱出現(xiàn)一些非常決絕的東西，這2個詞組過于，用在開頭并不合適。其實，你只不過是在陳述個人觀點，任何人都能持與你意見相反的態(tài)度。所以你不能再你的角度去否決別人的任何與你不一樣的觀點。

雅思寫作低分詞匯13. Perhaps/maybe

在雅思寫作或者其他的議論文中，使用Perhaps/maybe是非常不嚴謹?shù)摹Ｕ埥o出確定的事實根據(jù)及推理過程，否則考官覺得你的作文是自己揣測、臆想出來的，并無客觀確定的事實根據(jù)，缺少可信度。同時也說明你的寫作觀點立場不夠堅定，或是自己都在懷疑自己的論據(jù)或是觀點.

關(guān)于雅思寫作，各位考鴨需要銘記，作文不是對字數(shù)，湊滿字數(shù)并不能給你帶來寫作高分，關(guān)于雅思寫作，可以說是字字如金，無需冗雜的重復。如何在有限的文字內(nèi)將整篇文章的行文邏輯及思想表達清楚連貫，沒有語法錯誤，用詞準確，豐富，這才是一篇符合雅思寫作考官心目中優(yōu)秀作文的標準。

雅思考試小作文范文：線圖

題目是：The graphs below show the performance of the trains in a train company in October and November in 2008.

雅思寫作小作文范文

The two line charts compare the proportion of trains which were unpunctual and canceled in a particular train company in the whole October and the first three weeks of November in 2008.

As can be reflected from the first graph, starting from 20%, the number of late trains climbed to roughly one third before dropping considerably by the end of October when trains performed the best as merely 1% of them were late. Subsequently, the situation turned worse especially in the second week of November as more than half of the trains could not set out on time. After that, the figure declined, ending up with approximately 40%.

More significant variations could be spotted in the performance of canceled trains despite of a relatively lower percentage. At first, only 1% of trains were canceled, then the number soared to a peak at 7% in the following week followed by a plunge, dropping back to the same number of the first week. After some moderate ups and downs, trains canceled arrived at 4% in the end.

Overall, the problem of late trains was more serious in this train company and canceled trained had been controlled more effectively.

雅思寫作大作文范文：新聞傳播最有效的媒介

雅思寫作真題文章結(jié)構(gòu)

P1：引入話題+表明觀點(否定觀點一;肯定觀點二)

P2：指出報紙的弊端：報紙已不符合現(xiàn)代社會的需求。

P3：指出其他媒體的優(yōu)勢：其他媒體傳遞新聞比較方便快捷。

P4：總結(jié)：重申觀點。

雅思寫作高分話題表達

Bombard with 連環(huán)轟炸

Outdated 不符合時態(tài)潮流的

Time-efficient 具有時間效率的

Money-consuming 花錢的

Unfold (消息)傳開

Simultaneously 同時的

Put great emphasis on 強調(diào)

Internet access 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)接入

Fail to 未能做某事

Gain popularity 受歡迎的

雅思寫作高分結(jié)構(gòu)

Less time-efficient and cost-efficient, 形容詞做原因狀語

This is mainly because 這主要是因為

a contribution that every employer seems to be reluctant to make. 概括性同位語

So powerful are other media So...that倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

What readers just need to do 主語從句

not just gain more popularity but undermine the position of the old-fashioned newspaper . Not just…but also 的平行

雅思寫作大作文范文

Although bombarded with different kinds of news, audiences these days rarely read news by newspapers but by other media. However, my view is that in delivering news, newspaper is outdated and other media, as an effective and efficient tool for people to read news, is a far better alternative.

Less time-efficient and cost-efficient, newspaper is no longer preferable in today’s world. For one thing, the newspaper fails to change its role in spreading news in a world where every individual puts great emphasis on the effectiveness over time. This is mainly because producing newspaper is also man-made process of editing, printing news onto paper and finally distributing it to readers, which is quite time-consuming. When the news reaches the readers, it may be out of date. For another, the distribution of newspapers is also labor-intensive and thus money-consuming. For example, this needs workers to print, transport and sell the newspapers to readers, so that employees have to pay for more salaries, a contribution that every employer seems to be reluctant to make.

So powerful are other media, especially social media ,that they can spread news a great deal faster and farther than any other news outlets including the newspaper do. Without having to buy a newspaper, what readers just need to do is updating their Twitter or Facebook or surfing online whenever they want to read news or wherever they are as long as the Internet access is available. For example, as soon as some big events like the Boston Marathon bombing happen, the news unfolds simultaneously through social media as well as live TV broadcast, and travels to every corner of the world instantly. This is what the newspaper can hardly compete.

In conclusion, being convenient and fast in news spreading, other media not just gain more popularity among different readers but undermine the position of the old-fashioned newspaper.(306words)

雅思寫作真題大作文7分參考范文

雅思寫作大作文題目是：Some people believe that reading the newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that the more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有些人認為讀報是了解新聞的最好方式，而另一些人則認為，通過其他媒體看新聞是最有效的方式。討論兩種觀點并給出你的意見。

雅思寫作大作文7分范文

For hundreds of years, people get used to reading the newspaper to know current affairs, but this traditional mode is being challenged by the emergence of various forms of other media.

Since the invention of TV, it has become a common way for people to get informed of the latest news and compared with reading articles, sounds and moving images on TV can better convey the information. In recent years, with the universal access to the Internet, more people turn to reading on the web. Online reading saves the time of printing and distribution and more importantly, most of information on the web is free. Another advantage of new media is their less impact on the environment. The paper-making industry associated with printing newspapers is a heavy polluter and large consumer of wood resources.

However, some people support newspapers and they may give their reasons as follow. The censorship system of publishing newspapers is more rigorous, which means the Information people gain from the printed media is more reliable than that from the Internet. It is true that in many cases, the news turns out to be false after it spreads widely on the web. In addition, some readers, especially elderly citizens, may get accustomed to reading newspapers as they are not familiar with the functions of electronic gadgets.

My view is that the role of the newspaper is diminishing in our daily lives and this trend will become faster in the future. However, “newspaper” will continue to exist, perhaps in another form, demonstrated by the fact that many newspapers are published on websites as online newspapers now.

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